No One Loves Me & Neither Do I Feedback

Link to RP: https://brutalforcewrestling.rpg-board.net/t904-no-one-loves-me-neither-do-i#5732

Please give me feedback! Whether it be positive or negative! I will ask however, that it's kept to serious responses.

It's a nice look into backstage. I like that he is still as cocky as ever and that you showed that on the other hand his body is beat to shit. Also that he cares more about Allana's injuries than his own with his match. It shows his motivation.

I would have liked to hear more about his role in the big game. You could have talked more about the sharpe/amis vs. adler/colter feud (and the history of it or where it is now) after he said "I don't trust Tim." That line interested me a lot and would get me really curious if I was new and reading into the feud for the first time. There are always little spots like this where you can show more.

I stand by my statement of one of your best rps yet. I'm actually invested in the Amis character now.