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Tommy Stone Anime Was A Mistake
Posts : 155 Join date : 2015-11-24
| Subject: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 6:17 pm | |
| Thought I'd go ahead and make this for you guys. | |
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Akragth The Founding Father
Posts : 1174 Join date : 2015-11-20 Wrestler Name(s) : Akragth
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 6:21 pm | |
| So, as fair warning, I know that a few pics are missing. Some are ones I forgot to make, or are ones I put off making I know that Mikael's and Rey's pics are missing, as are Zack Jack's NPCs. I'll add them in when I get them made. But do list anything missing. Trying to read through the huge posts was pretty hard, and I put the whole thing together by myself, so there are doubtlessly mistakes in there. Good thing is, I can fix them after though the show has 'aired'!
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Tommy Stone Anime Was A Mistake
Posts : 155 Join date : 2015-11-24
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 6:25 pm | |
| Minus a few coloring issues I didn't really see anything. | |
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Fuck You I'm The Champ Amis Fucking Shelton
Posts : 188 Join date : 2015-11-30 Age : 29 Location : London UK Wrestler Name(s) : Amis Shelton
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 11:23 pm | |
| Fantastic read and brilliant debut show overall. My only piece is of criticism is that the matches are a bit short, which is fair enough considering you're hand-writing them. Other than that good stuff! | |
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Eight69 Zack's #1 stalker
Posts : 429 Join date : 2015-11-23 Age : 107 Location : Stalking Zack & OOC rolemodel :') Wrestler Name(s) : Mikael w/ Supremacy | Benny Stevens
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 11:29 pm | |
| I've tried to put a show up on Forumotion before and now I wonder how on earth you managed to fit all that text and ignored the limit lol.
Anyway my feedback is... I'm just glad I am part of this. The issues you've mentioned are all minor really, it happens. Top feds had those minor issues several times but they don't make the show look bad.
Great show and I haven't even read it 100% yet lol. Gonna get to it soon.
I see Hawk's point of view when it comes to match size but I think it's better this way. Save the big and more detailed matches for the PPV or bigger shows. Otherwise you might end up burning out.
But yeah don't wanna do a TL;DR read. Just awesome job Im happy to be part of BFW. | |
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Akragth The Founding Father
Posts : 1174 Join date : 2015-11-20 Wrestler Name(s) : Akragth
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 11:31 pm | |
| - Fuck You I'm Amis Shelton wrote:
- Fantastic read and brilliant debut show overall.
My only piece is of criticism is that the matches are a bit short, which is fair enough considering you're hand-writing them.
Other than that good stuff! A valid point. But I will say that most the efed shows I've read have matches which are quite a bit shorter. Like, a couple of moves, a finisher, done. Honestly, most people skip past the matches and straight to the results.
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Fuck You I'm The Champ Amis Fucking Shelton
Posts : 188 Join date : 2015-11-30 Age : 29 Location : London UK Wrestler Name(s) : Amis Shelton
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sat Dec 05, 2015 11:34 pm | |
| - Akragth wrote:
- Fuck You I'm Amis Shelton wrote:
- Fantastic read and brilliant debut show overall.
My only piece is of criticism is that the matches are a bit short, which is fair enough considering you're hand-writing them.
Other than that good stuff! A valid point. But I will say that most the efed shows I've read have matches which are quite a bit shorter. Like, a couple of moves, a finisher, done. Honestly, most people skip past the matches and straight to the results. Yup which I took into consideration too. It does save room for exciting and longer PPV matches like Fern said. | |
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Grant Bennett Cornrow Kenny
Posts : 261 Join date : 2015-11-22 Age : 37 Location : 6'0 Wrestler Name(s) : Grant Ward Bennett
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sun Dec 06, 2015 1:13 am | |
| Good show. I wish my match wasn't the length of a Divas match on Raw though (before the Diva Revolution started). | |
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Sinister Minister
Posts : 153 Join date : 2015-11-22
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sun Dec 06, 2015 9:41 am | |
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Aelyra
Posts : 108 Join date : 2015-11-24 Wrestler Name(s) : Aelyra Blight
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Sun Dec 06, 2015 12:01 pm | |
| A great first show! Kudos to Ak for writing the matches on his own. Thanks to everyone that contributed. | |
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Cartwright Chairman Of Funky Town!
Posts : 531 Join date : 2015-11-22 Location : Funky Town Wrestler Name(s) : Cartwright
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Mon Dec 07, 2015 11:01 am | |
| Good on Ak for whipping-up those matches by himself, I know how that feels from doing RAW! I liked the extra touch of there being a couple of pics per character, like one for the promo and another for matches! Nice little something that you didn't have to do but you did! 8) Great showing by everyone who wrote also! Thanks for diving-in and helping to get something new and special started with a BANG!!! | |
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Anthony Caffrey Phuck You
Posts : 165 Join date : 2015-11-23 Age : 105 Wrestler Name(s) : Anthony Caffrey
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Wed Dec 09, 2015 1:58 am | |
| Will we ever know our scores? | |
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Akragth The Founding Father
Posts : 1174 Join date : 2015-11-20 Wrestler Name(s) : Akragth
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Wed Dec 09, 2015 8:38 am | |
| Probably not. Not unless you guys really want to. | |
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Tommy Stone Anime Was A Mistake
Posts : 155 Join date : 2015-11-24
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Wed Dec 09, 2015 9:30 am | |
| It would be nice, even if it's only in the instance of like PPV RPs and special occasions. | |
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Loh
Posts : 146 Join date : 2015-11-25 Age : 35 Location : United Kingdom Wrestler Name(s) : Loh Elenas | Scott Truman
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:46 am | |
| I presume the ranking system reflects the RP Scores? | |
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Akragth The Founding Father
Posts : 1174 Join date : 2015-11-20 Wrestler Name(s) : Akragth
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:52 am | |
| I'd actually rather not publish the scores, because I think it'd probably cause more drama than it'd achieve anything. The rankings already reflect the scores, and I personally think that's enough. But, as I said, if people really want the scores then I'll go that way. That aside, if people want feedback for their RPs, then we can accommodate that, but we don't need to give the scores to do that. - Loh wrote:
- I presume the ranking system reflects the RP Scores?
Yea. I'm recording everything into a Google spreadsheet, to ensure that good records are kept for this place. The rankings I put together currently work on the cumulative scores from the past 3 shows, so the rankings themselves give an indication of the character's performance over the previous six weeks. | |
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Eight69 Zack's #1 stalker
Posts : 429 Join date : 2015-11-23 Age : 107 Location : Stalking Zack & OOC rolemodel :') Wrestler Name(s) : Mikael w/ Supremacy | Benny Stevens
| Subject: Re: Brutality #1 Feedback Thu Dec 10, 2015 1:50 am | |
| Tbh I don't really care about the other people's Rp scores. I only care about my score so, in my opinion, if one wants to know the respective Rp score, one should take it to pms. | |
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